Twisted Wonderland EN-Server Changes: Book 4, Schemer of the Scalding Sands

Original Ace: Feel free to give me a call if you get lonely over winter break〜

EN Ace: Feel free to hit me up if you get bored over winter break!

Original Ghost C: Indeed. Roast turkey, cake, a gingerbread house…well, not that we can eat any of it.

EN Ghost C: And plenty of it. Roast turkey, pie, a ham as big as your head, you name it…not that us ghosts can eat, of course.

Original Crowley: I’ll also promise you a holiday feast. Roast turkey, cake, a gingerbread house…

EN Crowley: I’ll even arrange for a holiday feast. Roast turkey, pie, a ham as big as your head…

Original Crowley: In fact, I’ll add piping hot spare ribs and a mountain of french fries.What do you say?

EN Crowley: In fact, I’ll throw in some piping hot spare ribs and mashed potatoes to sweeten–er, salt?–the deal.

Original Grim: Mrah! Piping hot spare ribs and french fries…!?

EN Grim: Mrah! Sounds like a one-way ticket to a food coma!

Original Kalim: It’s because we’re a big family. I have over 30 younger siblings back home.
EN Kalim: Wellwe’re a big family.

Original Grim: Th-thirty!?
EN Grim: Sorry you have THAT many siblings!?

Original Kalim: Hm, maybe 40. I stopped counting around 30!
EN Kalim: Yeah, so many I quit counting.

Original Kalim: Idiot. Where in the world is there a servant who makes their master wait on them.

EN Kalim: You don’t work as a servant, Kalim.

Original Prefect Option 1: Is it because you’ve had a master-servant relationship since you were little?
EN Prefect Option 1: Because you two have served him for so long?

(This is a particularly interesting change to EN: who is “you two”? Did the translators think that Kalim is also a servant?)

Original Jamil: A vassal would never be permitted to turn their blade upon their master, right?

EN Jamil: How could I betray our history like that? It would be beyond the pale.

Original Jamil: If I did something like that and Kalim’s father found out, the Viper family would suffer for it.

EN Jamil: Not to mention the lecture I would get from my parents…

Original Jamil: I’m sorry, but I’m not going to put my whole family on the street because of my selfishness.

EN Jamil: I’m sorry, but it just wouldn’t be right.

Original Prefect: That doesn’t seem like a responsibility that a child should be burdened with…

EN Prefect: I guess you make a good point.

Original Jamil: That is the fate of those born a Viper.

EN Jamil: (removed)

Original Jamil: A game of pretending to be masters and servants? Your relationship is just getting more confusing.

EN Jamil: Your relationship is getting more confusing by the minute.

Original Jamil: …normal, huh. I suppose that concept is lost on me, since I’ve been a servant of the Asim house since I was born. Masters are masters, and servants are servants. And that will likely never change.

EN Jamil: Normal, you say. I suppose that concept is lost on me. I’ve always been loyal of the Asim house. And that will likely never change.

Original Grim: There is such a thing as being too rich.

EN Grim: (removed)

“Hey, are you yankin’ my tail here?” was added to Floyd’s dialogue on EN.

The line, “And if you don’t know what that spell does, your face is going to crack when you hear this” was added to Azul’s dialogue on EN.

Original Grim: Even the old-looking faces of those ghosts look cute to me when I remember our time as prisoners.

EN Grim: Heh. These ghosts are a sight for sore eyes.